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Today my hook comes from my novel Without Saying A Word. In this scene, Rhean confesses to Laura something that she would NEVER have guessed.
“Laura,
there is something I need to say, and for me to tell you this, well,
it's very difficult. But I need to be straight with you.”
Laura
shook her body, and stepped away from him with a frown on her face.
“You
are going to tell me you are gay,” she blurted out wildly,
pre-empting his speech.
“I
had a feeling this was coming. How could you do this to me now? Well,
this is going to make life incredibly awkward for us.” She wrung
her hands in despair and humiliation.
Rhean
pulled her back into his arms, holding her tight despite her
struggles
“What
on earth are you talking about? I'm not gay—far, far from it. Would
I kiss you like this if I was interested in men?” His mouth crushed
hers, claiming her as his own, branding her.
So
what is it you have to tell me then?” she asked, still reeling from
the dominance of his kiss.
“That
I have never made love to anyone.” His voice was calm, his gaze
steady as his cheeks flushed crimson.
“Let
me get this straight. You mean you have never had sex? That you are
a...?” Laura's voice trailed off and she was at a loss for words.
It was rather a bizarre statement to have made—especially in the
gallery with its echoing atmosphere. Anyone could have heard, and
especially the staff.
That
he trusted her enough to tell her a very intimate secret was
flattering, but Laura now regarded Rhean in a whole new light.
“Not
at all, and yes, I am a virgin; a 34-year-old virgin.”
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A 34 year-old virgin man? Now that is a good hook, and I am intrigued about why they are in a gallery having such an intimate conversation! Must read more...
ReplyDeleteWell he won't be for long I expect :D
ReplyDeleteOooh, a virgin man, how unexpected. I hope she can teach him some tricks :)
ReplyDeleteA great hook there.
ReplyDeleteLol. That is quite a twist. I wonder if she'll be up for tackling a virgin ;) Great hook!
ReplyDeleteI doubt that state will last long lol ... great hook :)
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