Wednesday, 19 June 2013

Hump Day Hook

It's that time of the week again....Hump Day Hook.

I thought I would write how Rhean felt when he saw Laura. 

Her eyes caught Rhean's attention at first.  A turbulent grey colour, tinged with sadness and misery.  He waved at the woman as she struggled to put the key in the door.  For an instant, their eyes clashed.  He smiled at her, sending out an unspoken message of friendship.  As the woman lifted the corners of her mouth ever so slightly, her haunted expression lifted, and he saw the beauty within her begin to emerge.  Rhean nodded his head towards her as he opened his own front door.  Leaning back against the solid wood, he brought his hand up to his chest.  His heart pounded fiercely, his stomach in knots.  So this was love, he thought trying to catch his breath.  Fanbloodytastic.

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Love and hugs

Kooky xxxxx


  1. Wow. Cupid must be at it again! Great snippet!

  2. Awe, I love that we get an insider's perspective into his inner emotions and how he sees her. Very sweet snippet.

  3. Oh that's so soft and romantic... Lovely...xx

  4. Nice descriptives, and I love his reaction :D